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Hero Sections that Actually Convert $$$

The Inbox Newsletter
Hello hello, happy Thursday!
Max here with The Inbox again.
I wish my name was spelled Macks. That would be a lot cooler than Max.
Anyways…
We’re continuing to talk about design today.
Specifically, the hero section.
What is a hero section?
The hero section is the top part of an email.
It only makes up a fraction of your design, but it is by far the most important.
It’s the only part of your email guaranteed to by read by every opener.
In fact, most people will only read the hero section section.
75% of your efforts in design should go to the hero.
Optimize Above the Fold
The "above the fold" section is the section of the email that is viewed without scrolling.
To remove friction for the buyer, we want the above the fold (hero) to have everything the customer needs.
A great Above The Fold includes:
Clear headline
Strong graphic
Clear value prop
Clear button

Above the Fold
In 95% of cases, you should have a button in your hero and above the fold section.
As mentioned before, not every customer will scroll on your email, so you want a button available in the hero section.
This way EVERY customer has the ability to visit the site and go down the funnel.
Including a top button is an easy low-hanging fruit to automatically improve your click rates.
Keep It Simple
Simplicity always wins.
Adding too much complexity in your emails will overwhelm the customer.
More importantly, complex designs will distract from the whole purpose of the email… to sell.
Keep it light and clear any space around your CTAs so they stand out.
Outlines
Here are our two most used outlines for our hero sections that are simple and convert like crazy.
Steal ‘em for yourself!

Hero Templates
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Email Inspiration Of The Day
Brand:
Kaged
Notes:
Beauty of an email.
You can copy it:
Find one FAQ with your customer
Briefly answer the question
Offer your product as a solution to the question
Less than 100 words
It’s THAT simple… don’t overcomplicate it.
A/B Test Result of The Day

Variation A (top):
Text based email with two CTAs “Shop for Her” and “Shop for Yourself”
Variation B:
Text based email with one CTA “Shop Now”
Insights:
For this test we used Klaviyo’s feature of sending the test to 5% of recipients and sending the winning test to the remaining 95% after 4 hours.
This was a Mother’s Day email btw.
The email with two CTAs promoting you to shop for her OR shop for yourself ended up winning in terms of clicks.
If you have a gifting campaign, it may be best to include a “Shop For Yourself” CTA…
Helpful Links Of The Day
Reply to this email if you have any questions or further content you want covered.
Cheers,
Max
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